Author's Note

I wrote a film proposal for the Lottery, and although I am quite happy with it, I am very uncertain about the ending. While I believe the ending sends the right message, I believe that I could come up with a better one. I wish I could have found the answer while I was writing it, but it just wouldn't come to me. The story still works and the messages are still portrayed, however I would like to sometime comeback to this and make a new ending for this film.